Hearts Say Goodbye

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Hearts Say Goodbye

Love at first sight, November 29th
Years of good times and happy things to come
But somewhere in there I looked into your eyes
And you had changed your goals of a life plan.

I flash back now that your gone.
I wonder everyday why did you do the things you did
Lie that way, steal that way, ignore that way, dope up that way
But the most hurtful of all cheat
Though for years you contested you where never one
It had been done to many times to you.

All I have left to say is goodbye.

Now we are falling on three years since the eclipse of my heart
Same month and same day in November.
I still can’t figure out why you left me that way
Why I was neglected the last year for all the good things
I did for you and got for you and your daughter.

The thoughts of you now are most constant in my dreams
They scatter though my head trickling down into my beliefs
Not of us together again
But of what kind of closure could have been.
I miss you most when looking at the possessions you left behind
I try to put them aside and not contaminate my mind.

All I have left to say is goodbye.

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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