Heaven Sent

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Friendship
    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Poem Commentary

    She was JUST-THAT-FINE!

    Heaven Sent

    Let’s see, how do I begin?

     

    I guess with your silky hair, and your smooth skin.

     

     

    When you walk, time seems to stop.

     

    My heart quits beating, and begins to hop.

     

     

    Just to blink your eyes, is like poetry in motion,

     

    sending chills up my spine,  like I’ve been sprinkled with love potion.

     

     

    Your rosy cheeks glistens, from the bright shiny sun,

     

    really works my nerves, just sending me on one.

     

     

    Your luscious lips, where soft words flow,

     

    looks like a pair, of twin little puffy pillows.

     

     

    Your hour glass figure, has curves so sweet,

     

    if you feel my forehead, I bet you can feel the heat.

     

     

    Overall, I would have to admit,

     

    you are a gift heaven sent.

     

    Even the power, of a whirlwinds swirl,

     

    couldn’t make you NOT stand out, from any, other girl.

     

     

    Sometimes I just stare, at what seems to be nothing; but I swear,

     

    I can see your face in the sky, while the wind is blowing your hair.

     

     

    Young lady, this is a man, that wants you to understand,

     

    Just rub my bottle, I’ll pop out, and your wish, will be my, command.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Dreamer123 commented on Heaven Sent

    07-22-2009

    awww! this is sooo awesome I like the way you made it kind of like a song. it's awesome. you got talent! I also like the title. Heaven sent. like keyshia cole's song. I love it. its beautiful. keep up the great work

    FLAWLES

    07/22/2009

    Thank you VERY much. You saying it's kind of like a song is compliment enough. I really appreciate your comments. I kind of had someone here on OriginalPoetry in mind when I wrote it; but I'll never tell. Not even her.

    jademelissa74 commented on Heaven Sent

    07-22-2009

    Wow! This submission has been searched for, as long as time has existed. I love the way that you describe her silky hair :)) You are so talented LE$! I can truly appreciate how frank you are when you try to get your point across! 10 from me ;)

    FLAWLES

    07/22/2009

    Thanx much EB. You don't know how much compliments mean coming from you.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    FLAWLES’s Poems (107)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    "Pardon Me America, but...." 0
    "Missing 'JadeMelissa7
    4'"
    0
    "Long Live The Warrior" 0
    "Searching" 0
    "A Mockingbird named Patrick" 0
    Why a Caged Bird Sings 1
    "Nobody Knows" 1
    Sandy Hook, RIP 1
    "A MERRY K.K.K. AH" 0
    Thinkin' Bout Mark 2
    “Month Of The Ram” (March 21st – April 21st) 1
    The Week In Review 0
    Welcoming The Pain 1
    Please Come Back 2
    "Thinking About You" 1
    "My First Love" 1
    "Blissful Daydream" 2
    Do I Not Speak The Truth? 0
    Alone At The Office 1
    The Creeper, Or The Prey? 0
    Smile 1
    Yo Rodger.......
    .....for the good times
    0
    Open Your Eyes 3
    Dark Path 1
    Erotic Volcano 3
    Sitting On My Bunk 2
    NIGHTMARE IN HELL 4
    "Someone Help Her" 5
    CALL OF HOPE II (Inspired by Call of Hope)Withouta
    ny
    2
    POSITIVE THOUGHTS 0
    MY BABY'S PAIN 1
    TEST OF TIME 0
    Untitled 8
    To Protect And To Serve 8
    Heaven Sent 2
    Confession Of Lust 3
    My RSVP 3
    Somethin' Has Got To Give 7
    To Be...You! 2
    Snake Invader 4
    Her Box Of Cereal 4
    Tattoo Of You 3
    Eyes Of A Dream 1
    Momma Lorraine 2
    Life 1
    The Mistress That Was 2
    Lyrical Gun 2
    DAMN You Look Good! 4
    I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike 3
    Goodbye Mike 3
    Over-rated? Yep 1
    ? ME ? 2
    If You What? 1
    Baby I'm SORRY! 3
    R.I.P. Farrah 0
    Eternal Incarceration 2
    R.I.P. Coach Thomas 1
    From LE$ To Bri 0
    Eye C U 1
    My Special Key 5
    The Farewell Message 1
    FLAWLE$' Wings Of Healing 1
    I Have Been Crowned 1
    Missing Sequel 1
    The King K9 6
    His Game's Up 5
    Non-Stop 0
    Fantasy Flight 1
    Always Hope For MistyDawn 1
    Take You Time And Hurry Up! 2
    A Child's Cry For Help 2
    Taybear, Goodbye! 3
    Love Is Also Like... 6
    Gank Move 4
    Breaking News 2
    I Don't Believe It! 1
    A Message To Irma 1
    Inspired by a "Sexual Tension" 2
    Aries 1
    For Sensitive People 0
    Pay Attention 1
    When We Meet 4
    LE$ To The Rescue 3
    A Perfect World 2
    Faith In The World 2
    It's Miller Time 1
    Inspired by an "OriginalCyn" 1
    I Rise 6
    Incorrect Perception 4
    To Bang Or Not 7
    What Is The Evil 1? 3
    She Did That 5
    Erotic Dream 15
    Self A Steam 3
    Cat Burglar 5
    Creamin Honey 3
    Whipped By Lady T 3
    FLAWLE$ 4
    Be Specific 2
    The Mind 4
    Let's Pretend 4
    Kiss Me 5
    Erotic Encounter 9
    Condolence 1
    Imagination 5
    HELP! 6
    Jerrell: My Crown Prince 6