Heaven

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    Heaven
    I remember your fingers
    As they controlled my life
    I remember your hands
    As they borne me anew
    I remember your feet
    As they stamped in me a lust for life
    I remember your knees
    As I knelt on mine to kiss a bruise
    I remember your words
    As they brought me the truth

    I remember your eyes
    That sought out my heart
    I remember your chest
    That left me feeling better about myself
    I remember your mind
    That bestowed upon me it's intelligence
    I remember your heart
    That taught me lesson by lesson
    I remember your sex
    That gave to me the greatest gift

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    sk commented on Heaven

    05-07-2009

    Quite a piece of writing from one so young...very good!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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