Hell's Fire

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  • Lost Love

    Hell's Fire

    Released from all desire

    Set free from love by you

    I languish in the fire

    Until the pain is through

    Surrounded by the flames

    I beg of you release

    Come save me from this pain

    And make this torture cease

    But every day the pain grows

    My cries turn into screams

    No matter the way the wind blows

    The pain invades my dreams

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    SavVySam commented on Hell's Fire

    08-16-2009

    Perfect form in both rhyme and rhythm! Nice work!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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