Hell's Undertaker

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To a Arcreium for his loyal support and for his continuous approval

May you rest in hell well my friend. =^.^=

Hell's Undertaker

Belive me i say! to this tale i tell
About a man, an undertaker from hell
His cripples hands, his back bent
An old man? but his eyes had a red glint

He smiled upon the living
He thought and schemed at their being
Silently, carefully, he dug a hole
His purpose? to kill and bury another soul

He'd cut off arms and legs in delight
Begging, teasing for a fight
He'd tear out your eyes and fead them to the crows
He'd break and twist off fingured and toes

Laughing with glee, he would skin your face
Leaving raw muscle and blood in its place
He'd boil you alive, or impale you right through
Slicing, cutting, ripping, burning, every part of you

Before you die even though you beg
He places you in your earthen bed
Alive he burys you no one will guess or know
leaving a mystry, and pain, and sorrow

Hell's Undertaker..., a demon in human form
He's been around since before you were born
Do yourselves a favor before he comes for you
Run like hell for this tale is true

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winterkou commented on Hell's Undertaker

06-21-2010

Woww your writing is indeed dark and chilling. I enoyed this I will have to read more .

mustascheman commented on Hell's Undertaker

02-12-2010

Great imagination! Makes an .."eaarthen bed" sound quite comfortable. I like it! Talk ya' later, A.T.

EvilPoems

02/12/2010

alright, see ya then!

stever commented on Hell's Undertaker

02-12-2010

dam this is some burtal stuff... I LOVE IT..you realy got a good way with the word..this lovely writeing ty again you know for reading my crap..StEvEr

EvilPoems

02/12/2010

no problem! thanks again ^.^

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