Help Me

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I just wrote this out of the blue right now.. I guess i dedicate this to all who needs help and saving and all the disfortunate people who were born with more disadvantages then we have... I hope you like it..

Help Me

Help Me please.
I am Blind, I can not see,
I am deaf and I can not read.

Someone Please, Are you willing to help me?
I am crippled and I can not walk.
My voice is softened and I can not talk.
My arms are cut off and they got something up their sleeve's.

Is it to much to ask for a little help here?
My feelings are bottled up and I have no tears.
I fear they are going to hurt me.
Please, Jesus help me, Save me, I beleive!

Don't need your help no more.
I am cured Thanks to Jesus, Our Lord.
He gave me sight and hearing,
I can walk and I can talk.

This world is cruel, but amazing.
I Thank God he is King,
And sent Jesus, The next best thing to save me.
I need not for no one else to Help Me...
Cuz I am happy and I am FREE!

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Coltsfan777 commented on Help Me

03-06-2011

Very uplifting!! Makes us realize what all we have to be thankful for because there are so many people out there in the world who have so little.

tierra7 commented on Help Me

11-14-2010

very sincere and deep write,filled with much emotions and Hope... When we feel like there's no other way...a door opens...if he or our life leads us to it, he will definitely carry us through it...great pen...Love And Light, Tierra@}-'-,

BlackButterfly1 commented on Help Me

11-02-2010

I love the way the poem begins screaming for help and ends with a revelation. Only He can save us and once we realize that yes, we do become free. Good job.

keller commented on Help Me

10-26-2010

i would love to hear more about this great being called god,does he bring the happiness that is promised?Does he even care about the human race at all anymore

Worthless

10/26/2010

Yes he does even if it doesn't seem like it. The devil is also in control and the farther you distance yourself from him the more he tries to break you. God does care and is in control even though it does not seem like it, He is. I mean i am in almost the worst hell their is and I still survive somehow. You just gotta have faith and keep it cuz the best reward us christians can have is eternal peace in heaven with your family and friends. And just because you hand your life over to God does not necesarely mean your life will get better or improve on earth, but it does give you something to look forward to when you die. Which I hope my last breath ain't to far away.. But anyway God is great.

kalel commented on Help Me

10-24-2010

EXCELLENT!! And well timed, spent the day at the library yesterday and was surrounded by what appeared to be day trip for a mentaly challanged group. Really put my little tirals and tribulations into perspective. This sums it up pretty darn well. Kepp writing kiddo you got the spark.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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Silent words slowly heard.... 0
Fuck you satan!!! 0
Wake up Sunshine... 0
God has a plan.... 0
Unscrambled word pool... 0
Here we go again.... 1
Call me please???? 0
Your dancing a path to my heart... 0
Will you be my valentine?? 0
Words... 0
A game of hide and seek... 2
Last Breath 0
Justice system, My A$$.... 1
Satans slave 0
Dear Daughter, My Sweet Princess... 0
Is there really hope??? 1
Dear Heavenly Father.... 0
Deep in the depths of hell... 0
Waiting in torture for you to call.... 0
I dont understand...
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0
Children.... 0
Butterflies in the sky... 0
Fire ant on Rampage... 0
Grocery store Hottie... 0
LORD, I NEED YOU!!!!!! 1
Young Love 0
I Barely Know You... 1
missing you today, tomorrow and forever... 0
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Faithful Mysteries... 3
A Nightmare without a Care... 3
A CURSE FROM HELL.... 2
I HATE COMPUTERS 0
Satans Game of Pain... 1
TODAY AND ALWAYS 2
I sit here and wait 5
mother nature 2
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I Need a Good Nights Rest... 1
Now I know my A,B,C's!!! 3
Love Life.. (Short Story) 1
hmmm 0
Mystery Man... 3
The Empty Closet 2
Death And Life Combined 0
He's playing games with me! 0
Pen and Paper 4
MEN AND B(*)(*)BIES??
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Men 4
HANG WITH ME 1
Humans.. 1
I Got A Feeling... 1
Go To Bed My Ugly Friend.. 1
A Father's Voice 2
Love Does NOT EXIST 1
HELL 4
Help Me 10
High On Lies 6
I Hate You Luke 5
Connect the Tears 1
Blood Tears 1
Disappearing Memory 2
Forclosure 4
Mouse Hunting 4
Nothing Left 3
I wanna... 2
30 Minute Meal 3
So, Folks 2
This Hill I stumble upon... 2
STRENGTH 9
I LOVE... 4
Feelings of Imagination and truth... 2
Who Am I? 7
I Don't have time 2
Dear Mr. President 4
STAB ME In the HEART PLEASE! 2
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Girly Girl... 1
A Seed in Bloom... 0
Deathly Pissed... 0
Life 2
Is this what you call a home? 2
Love is fake? 2
March 27... 1
FAT & UGLY!!! 3
Loving You Still? 4
Opening Day... 1
My sister and Me... 6
Boyfriend Lies? 0
What do you care what's wrong with me? 2
Tied to the sheets that make me bleed... 4
What do I do? You leave me so confused... 0
The Love of A Child... 4
Sleep Tight... 1
Letter to You, Not knowing who... 1
Kids... 1
I GIVE UP!!!! 5
A love that ain't there 1
A new lust, not love... 1
Is there anything you need today? 1
JOBS (NOT FOR ME APPARENTLY) 3
Never Enuf 1
Real Man 2
God is Here 2
Worthless 4