HELP!

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    HELP!

    The wind blew and the water rose.
    It continued to rise, till it was up to my nose.
    I was so scared, I didn't know what to do.
    Half submerged houses, were my only view.

    I managed to climbed, on top of someone's home.
    No-one was there, I was all alone.
    I sat and waited, but nobody came.
    I'm thinking life in New Orleans, would never be same.

    A few days went by, then felonies and misdemeanors.
    If it was any other town, I'm sure I'd seen FEMA.
    But FEMA didn't arrive, we were on our own.
    I'm thinking the government's heart, is made of stone.

    I climbed off the roof, down into the water so deep.
    I'd made up my mind, I'd be no casualty.
    I searched for others, that maybe alive.
    We had to help each other, if we were to survive.

    When the National Guard, finally came in
    snipers in buildings, started firing on them.
    They weren't prepared for this, they were outnumbered.
    I wasn't surprised at all, at another, government blunder.

    The thought of help, quickly crashed and burned.
    Could it be, that black lives, are of no, concern.
    Then reality hit, lives continued to go;
    and the ones that lived, had little babies in tow.

    Shelters were set up, with poor sanitation.
    Lack of food and fresh water, was the main situation.
    Rage and violence, erupted all around.
    For the will to survive, quickly infested this town.

    We were bused away, all over the land.
    I guess Bush is doing, whatever he can.
    Who knows when it's time, when we can finally move back.
    Hopefully this will be an issue, when we're thru with Iraq.

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    sweetnspicy8283 commented on HELP!

    08-13-2009

    this was really deep made me think back 2 that day i remember where i was and how i felt so helpless especially 2 my fam that i could reach out 2 and help the ones i lost and the ones we may never c again becasue they kno not where we r and we dont kno where they r... deep and poetic

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    From your comment it seems "Katrina" was personal for you. If ou lost a friend or loved one, you have my deepest sympathy. No one I knew was affected by "her"; but I did and still do feel for he people as I was watching and reading the news. Thank you for your words and stay blessed.

    hdmac commented on HELP!

    08-01-2009

    This is like a political poem. I like your honesty.

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    I did not mean for this to be political, it was just written from what I read and saw in the news as it was happening. Thank you for your comment.

    GucciGurl commented on HELP!

    07-02-2009

    iI love this. I had chills all over my body thinking about how terrible it had to be . I watched the tv during that time as if it was my life that depending on it. Im sure that you thank God everyday for the second chance that was given. It was truely showing that we as a country are not as strong as others in the world think we are. Just like 9-11. We always hear help take care of ppl in other countrys send money. How bout we start taking care of our own first!

    FLAWLES

    07/02/2009

    Thanx GG. I appreciate your comments. It's so sad to know that this country could have responded not only sooner; but also in a more efficient way.

    jannifer commented on HELP!

    06-19-2009

    yea u rite i lost a lot of my family i feel like i have no 1 but still im strong i have 2 get throw this 1 way r the other and i will do it rite this time im dorry if u lost loved 1 s 2 but life gos on im still hurt 2 think bout it i wanna go back but im so scared do did a great job i wanna 4get this ever happened but its not that easy

    FLAWLES

    06/19/2009

    I can't imagine experiencing going through something like that. Just reading about it brought tears to my eyes.

    litldeer commented on HELP!

    06-19-2009

    This poem really touched my heart. The rhyming was tight and flawless. I'm sorry you had to go through this. Hopefully it only made you stronger. I am so honored to have read the experience from someone who was there. I have often wondered about the people who survived and the ones who didn't. I am honored. Great job. Perfect 10

    FLAWLES

    06/19/2009

    I'm glad you were touched by this; but I have to say, I wasn't there. This was written from what I read in the newspaper while I was in jail.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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