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    I wrote this poem when I was in high school...

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    Help me Lord,
    I am bored,
    I can't talk,
    All I can do is walk,
    Help me Lord,
    I can't look,
    In my book,
    I love,
    As much as a dove,
    I hate as little as a stake,
    Help me Lord!!!

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    melanie23 commented on Help

    08-20-2009

    i have i bit of a hard time following this one but it does have good flow

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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