Her feet

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    Her feet

    From two o'clock till nine at night,
    she in dress was showing.
    Although she was of the prettiest sight,
    her feet must have been glowing.

    When she sat down the seat next mine,
    she asked me kind to rub them.
    I said "Lets make this a proper rhyme,
    keep your feet at your shoes bottom!"

    "I'm sure" she said "You have such hands,
    with which you tread them worthy?"
    "That's true" said i "but so it stands:
    Not when your feet are dirty!"

    "Dirty are they not!" she said
    "Just hot and a bit tired.
    And maybe, yes, a little whet,
    cause babe they have transpired."

    After which she slipped of her shoes,
    lay on my lap her feet.
    How barely i didn't my conscious lose,
    overwhelmed all by this heat!

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    TwistedAce commented on Her feet

    07-21-2009

    i like it! It's a new take to poetry and it's refreshing i definitely like it :)

    Sammylin

    07/21/2009

    Hy TwistedAce, Thank you for reading this funny work! I dident want it to be raiteble so i've tryed to make the rait thing go away but it doesent seem to want to... Anyhoo, i'm glad to see this one was liked by you! Greetings: Sammylin.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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