her final words part II

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    her final words part II

    by: linda
    orginally by: kym

    Reflections of her childhood past She rarely sees the good. Her story isn't rare but true, no lie and in these reflections she sees herself die A child so abused and forelorn She hated and cursed the day she was born... Her Mother didn't have a clue Of
    what her poor daughter was going thru. Seven Years old at the time, for Heaven's sake In her minds eye she deserved a break. She walked around with burdens galore.. She couldn't fake a smile no more. Not even her mom could make her grin Cause of all
    But with all you've tried There is still a brighter side God made my sister number one And I'm so proud of what she's become She now lives her life as a bright young lady Unlike You . YOu are so shady She's very sensitive about her past.But she will strive to do what's right And she's not giving you a second thought tonight.. She'll live out her life and not look back At the times You threw her life off track She's vibrant and youthful... What else can I say. But thanks to You She can w

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    kpeery09 commented on her final words part II

    03-06-2010

    I love it, keep up the good work, the flow of it was beautifully and wonderfully written.
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    anderneglakay commented on her final words part II

    06-20-2009

    that is good is that fiction or true everything was on point
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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