Her Light of Smiles

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As a child the night skies would

Her Light of Smiles

Look do you see the star that outshines the others?
Do you see the spectrum of lights that it designs?
Somewhere in the East, this star is glowing fine.
What a sorrowful look my child reveals, I asked
What sadness takes her smile, she replies, it is
the night takes her play to hide it in the day......

Come see this star that beams afar, like  
the rainbow of the night, so amazing the
rich colors of its light.
She walked to her window to gaze upon its
glow, softly her smile begins to show.........
Quietly she stood at the moment soft and pure,
sadness lifted fast it left her heart for sure.

She said sometimes watching the sky became
her silent play. The stars can bring the joy in...
sleeping hours of the day.
Her smile was warm and picturesque, her eyes 
was filled with starlight wonder, she lit the room
like lightning lights the thunder.

This moment rare my heart will keep, my loving child,
now sound asleep.  In morning when she
awakes that star gaze time she will recall.........
and wear her smile when raindrops fall...
Standing in her window tall....
Her light out shines it all....

© allseasonsverse





 

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Altair commented on Her Light of Smiles

09-04-2018

Another well written piece, I had to see the first one you posted for my own reasons...I like how you write.......... That is all =)

Allseasonsverse

09/08/2018

Thank you, I appreciate your kind words, and I am your fan. I feel the same about your work. Take care Allseasonsverse

Allseasonsverse commented on Her Light of Smiles

01-10-2018

To share a starlit night, the awesome vast universe is amazingly beautiful and special!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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