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  • Lost Love

    Her

    I see her rarely, so beautiful, so fine
    A valued artwork, preserved into time
    Her grace, her gentalness, her quickness of pace
    Her hair bundled with silk black lace

    Her skin so smooth, her eyes so bright
    Clearly a remarkable, desireable sight
    Her touch so gental, her smile so clear
    Losing her is what i fear.

    What can you expect when you have found true love?
    Why did the raven fall in love with the dove?
    Could my life be less miserable but instead
    I am blessed with the gift i can never have.

    Bent over and broken, my heart shatters
    From pain that i suffer, a veteran withered and battered
    Wrought from anger and frusteration
    Pain will become my domination

    She will regret this monster she has made
    I shall watch from the shadows and deep shade
    When she needs saving, i will show
    And kill her attacker form head to toe

    Then i shall again confess my sins, show her what she made
    With my will, strenth, and my blade
    Then i will forge my anger and show her
    That she has made a heartless killer.

    Once with dignity, once with pride
    I smiled upon the love inside
    Now with regret, anger, and hate
    Her time to repent old love is too late

    I have grown tired form the dating game
    Blood and murder not love will become my fame
    Crawl to me, beg with want and desire.
    But, i shall laugh, my love for you, is over.

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    EyesOfRain commented on Her

    08-22-2012

    Excellent poem. I loved reading every second of it! I can relate to this well.

    EvilPoems

    08/22/2012

    lol dark memories, yet still blessed right?

    EyesOfRain

    08/23/2012

    Exactly. :)

    gutsXglamXgore commented on Her

    10-11-2009

    This is so beautiful. I feel that way about love most of the time. I feel this exact way about my last ex.

    emokid commented on Her

    07-25-2009

    this is one of the best poems i've ever read! dont give up. you'llet better. you have amazing talent

    sorgegirl commented on Her

    07-21-2009

    I really enjoyed this. It reminds me of someone.... Great job!

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