Here Lies My Soul

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    Here Lies My Soul

    When the darkness

    alights upon my soul,

    reflecting shadows-

    heart's foreboding.

    Wretched,

    misleading,

    unsure-

    life passes before me

    as if lost within a dream.

    Withered,

    this emptiness;

    vast, yet deceptive.

    I drown in pools

    of memories,

    peace within reach

    yet without reprieve.

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    natay4rmwb commented on Here Lies My Soul

    02-07-2011

    blue this poem is beutiful i like the flow and it says alot in the shortness of it great job

    winterkou commented on Here Lies My Soul

    01-24-2011

    this write does a nice flow and says alot for such a short poem. good poem.

    Musicmynded1 commented on Here Lies My Soul

    01-20-2011

    i agree totally with papapa... u have good flow in this manner.

    StandingBear commented on Here Lies My Soul

    01-03-2011

    A very well written philosophical write, an instant classic. SBear

    papapaczki commented on Here Lies My Soul

    01-03-2011

    I like this. I enjoy poems this style when you write them. Your words are fun to read, and you don't over word things.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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