Here we go


  • Meldarth

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Not sure something I'm playing with........just trying to capture that moment of a pure song when you can't help but dance......:)

Here we go

Beats of the music;
slowly begin to sway,
not noticing as first,

A tap of aafoot,
then a bob of the head,
look in your eye,

rising to dance,
matters not what you look like,
for the beats have taken over,

energy in the room,
DJ spinning,
controlling the flow,

all are one,
flowly freely with each other,
no cares at this moment,

there is a pause,
everyone looks around,
moving as one,

hammer of the beats;
slowly pulsates back to life,
and the dance takes over again.

these simple moments,
with sweat and bodies so close,
moving as one,

lost in the music,
we are one,
and nothing else matters,

Pureness returns,
Nothing but joy,
Happiness flows from everyone,

Suddenly as it begins,
the song ends,
everyone parts sadly like nothing has happened.

Clinton Trapp '12

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windsongs commented on Here we go


been there done that once:)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Meldarth’s Poems (29)

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Patience and Duck Tape. 0
The Cage and Madness of Darkness 0
Darkness Rises 0
Some day 1
Fate 0
A New Day part II 0
A new day 0
Illusion of Alone 2
Echoes of Future Past 0
Wise words; or a foolish dream 4
A talk with Life 0
Dreams of Life 0
Life 1
Atlas holding my World 1
Voyage of Dreams 0
Capturing of a moment. 1
Here we go 1
Blink of Time 2
Feeling of Tears 2
The Pain of Truth 17
A Summer's Day 33
World of a 2 year old 8
Dream a little Dream 5
Light of Hope 1
Hollow Nights 2
Childhood 1
The Phoenix 1
The Night 1
Fields of Gold 1