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  • Zombie6622
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Here. :)

Here

Here

let me lie here

i want to die here

i cant survive here

 Here in my castle

Here in my head

Here in between the sheets and the bed You can see my life here

indescribable

infatuation here

dead to the world here

let me die here

unsuspectingly

and unloving

HERE

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Musicmynded1 commented on Here

05-12-2011

very deep felt emotion within the lines you've chose "here".

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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