HERO

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HERO

Be my hero,
I need someone to look up to,
Help me up,
When I've fallen.
Be my hero,
Save the day.
There is so much pain inside me,
Most of which I hide.
So here I sit,
Waiting for someone,
To tell me I'll be okay.
Be my hero,
Tell me it's alright to cry.
I draw red lines across my arm,
I sit and wait for them to become puffy and pink,
Scars.
Those lines run my life.
I don't know how much more I can take.
With a flick of the wrist,
I've gone too deep.
I don't want to go out like that,
In a puddle of blood.
Be my hero,
Tell me it's alright to feel.
I don't want to hurt you.
But some times it gets so hard.
There's no other way out.
They keep pushing me down,
I can't find an escape,
There is no way out.
Be my hero,
SAVE MY LIFE

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lonewolf commented on HERO

12-06-2009

suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. dont go down that road. there are people who care. seek them out. be stronger than the pain. use your talent as a writer to express you feelings. make you voice heard, and dont be denied. im here if you wanna talk.

silentcry09

06/03/2010

suicide is an escape... it lets people know that they really do have control over their lives even if it does mean that it's spinning out of control

Artie commented on HERO

11-27-2009

We all have some way of dealing with pain and stress. Some good some bad. We try to overcome, but sometimes fail. The problem is, if allowed to continue, patterns form. Then life changes, and usually not for the better. Each day you move further from the solution, it's that much harder to find your way back. Always remember, you have control over your actions. Live life accordingly. As always you express your feelings with pinpoint precision, and sledgehammer impact. 10 from me

Beetle726 commented on HERO

11-18-2009

Whatever hurt you so deeply can be healed. Everyone has a hero, yours waits if you see. I was a hero to someone in my younger days, even though I did not know until after the fact. Your life will chage I promise you. Keep the faith. By the way, you are a deep, emotional person, expressing your most inner thoughts so well.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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