Hey Pretty Girl

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    This is partly my first writing. Up to the seventh line, this was where I left off remembering the rest. Now I have added more that brings me up to date with this currently.

    Hey Pretty Girl

    Hey pretty girl standing there,
    Why do you act like you don't care,
    Oh, there is no reason why,
    I just could not help pass you on by,
    Why must I go away this day?
    I will just return once more,
    You may think of me as such a bore,
    Alone I was and you I thought,
    Would only be the one for me?
    To last forever and ever,
    This is how I felt, still do to this day,
    Sadly this is all that he,
    Has to say!

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    SilverGirl commented on Hey Pretty Girl

    11-28-2009

    Another broken heart singing out. Welcome to my world charles dear. A lucky lady is the one who wins your heart. This poem is lovely.. Hugs SG

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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