• tstlove4never
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Hi?

"Hi" you say to me
Day after day
Why? Why not bye?
It fits our case
So well you see
Cause everyday
We look at each other
And we cry
We fight
Everyweek
And our friends
Are lost at possibilites
Of what could happen
Should we part
Will one cries?
Will one stay alive?
What if one dies?
So i guess hi it is
Aren't u happy?
I am for
Should we part
Id be the one to die
Way down deep inside
I'd cry and yet
I'd always be alive

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EinStud commented on Hi?

08-02-2009

Hi! The poem is good. I think there are many questions you raise. -EinStud

tstlove4never

08/05/2009

thanx i appreciate that

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

tstlove4never’s Poems (37)

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Ponderment 0
Lost 0
Tears 0
A Dream 0
Fate Of Mine 0
Affected Life 0
Cycle 0
Russian Roulette 0
Ignored 0
Hatred 1
Hurting Me 0
Dead 0
Caught In a Web of Lies 0
Poem For an Angel 1
Pain You Bring 0
Listen 1
You 3
Breaking 2
Lies 2
Shouldn't Have Believed You 1
You Lied 0
Hated 0
Player 0
Life And Love 2
Now 1
Let Me Free 0
Meant to Be? 0
Times 0
Whats Going On? 0
Lost Mind 1
Pain 1
Hi? 1
The Truth 0
Love 1
Guess 0
What Happened 0
You know 0