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    The feelings that I feel are trapped in my inner soul.
    The striving pressure still exists, pulling at my mind.
    The sacred thoughts I keep, scared to let them out.
    The overwhelming sense that gives me so much doubt.
    The anger I keep inside, for the sake of everyone else.
    I put on a mask, to make me more reliable to myself.
    One day I will press through, but for now I have the real me hidden.

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    loveangel4life commented on Hidden

    02-02-2009

    Its crazy how much I relate to this. Keep the poems coming. Even with such a short poem your talent shines through.

    yermobutterfly commented on Hidden

    12-18-2008

    i like your poem.

    Vincent commented on Hidden

    12-14-2008

    Nice poem

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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