Hide the Moon

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    Hide the Moon

     Whats done in the dark, can bear no sparks
    Or dreams defend, in a hope for the end
    Savage thoughts of mindless acts
    A battered soul comes under attack
    Nightmares of waking from a sleep of peace
    Hearts are shredded and no sign of ease
    Piece together my broken bones
    Pick me up, and help me home
    What i did in the dark, it left its marks
    And i beg for you never to see them.

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    1LostGypsy commented on Hide the Moon

    10-06-2009

    Another great piece of work! I think we share similar styles. I have a piece like this one as well called Less Is More. You have to check it out please. I am craving your feedback.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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