Hiding....

1 Comments

Hiding....

My heads about to explode
from my life goin to and fro
idk where to go
and im feelin so alone
my heart is turnin cold
while i force a petty show
of emotions for display
and my mind is such a cage
i have no choice but to stay
and be what i am
tho its really all a sham
so i wont embarass my friends and fam
So here i am 
a lost child
left in a twisted game
pure pain and adrenaline
is this purgatory im livin in
and i jus cant win
because my soul wont cleanse
and free itself
of sin
from everything it keeps trapped
within.... 

Poem Comments

(1)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

ShadowEyes commented on Hiding....

04-16-2011

Very well written. That's really about all I have to say about this piece. Keep up the good work.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

demon’s Poems (25)

Title Comments
Title Comments
A Look Inside.... 1
How i feel.... 1
my world.... 1
Not a single tear.... 1
Hiding.... 1
Dream Girl.... 0
Freedom.... 0
In the fight to survive.... 0
Rambling.... 1
I can only imagine.... 0
I know i love you because.... 0
Nobody Cares.... 2
Love.... 0
Somethings Missing.... 0
Hate.... 0
Christians... 0
Does it matter.... 0
A look inside.... 0
God are you the one.... 0
Frown 0
Wicked.... 0
Friends.... 0
failure.... 0
She's Leaving... 0
Explaining myself.... 2