Higher

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Higher

What if everything we tried
Just wasn't good enough?
Would we make excuses and
Give up when things seem tough?

What would this nation be like
If our efforts were poor?
These and other questions are
Not the kind I'd ignore

Tell me, what are we to do?
What would be their retort
If we said it's not our fault
Because we came up short?

No responsibility
Would be taken, you see?
How could you ever respect
A man as low as me?

Keep your expectations low
That's what I would proclaim
They won't be disappointed
If our efforts are lame

Keep lowering your standards
Just how low can you go?
If there were no incentives
There'd be no room to grow

I believe it's overdue
For us to raise the bar
I attest, let's do our best
To not stay where we are

Our nation was founded on
Hard work and sacrifice
We did not win one world war
We really did it twice!

We need to be a nation
That all can admire
Our pursuit of happiness
Can raise the bar higher

Please expect far greater things
In all that you aspire
Soon you'll see, there's victory
Whenever you aim higher 

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EyesOfRain commented on Higher

09-21-2012

Excellent points made in this piece. Unfortunately change requires more effort, so between laziness and lack of motivation I don't see much hope. That's the beauty of hope however, I don't have to see any evidence to back up it's existence, and can have it regardless! Nice job!

jj1562 commented on Higher

05-20-2012

I love it, i write alot on this topic to i believe every congressman should have to be atleast 35 and worked a blue colar job most of 20 years. No more rich newyorker buying his way in.

schizopoet

05/21/2012

Hello jj1562, Thank you for you review. I have not received any reviews of any of my 300 poems in a very long time. Thank you. It is nice to know that somebody is reading and enjoying my poetry. One day, I wish to put most of my 300 poems into a book. If you liked my poem HIGHER, you might like my award-winning poem titled FROG or a poem that I've dedicated to our troops overseas titled THE MILITARY. Bye for now. Hope you hear from you again.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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