• babygirl4028
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Poem Commentary

Its about a dude i really really like but i am too afraid to tell him. I really like him. Don't think i love him. but i know i like him. I don't throw the word love around like its nothing. I know the meaning. I just don't know if i feel it yet.

Him

He is older
I am younger
He is awesome
I am not
He can be a jerk
But has a sweet side
He is almost perfect
He has his flaws
But who doesn't?
He likes me
I can tell
I like him
He can't tell
I want to be with him
I am too afraid to ask him
I am afraid that I'm wrong
But if I am
Oh well
I know we will stay friends
For a long time
He is my bro's friend
But he is my friend too
Or so he says
I love my friend and family
But this one is different.
It's not me
But him!!! <3 

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jessicanichole8 commented on Him

11-01-2010

that is a great poem i think i know who u r talking about!! phillip!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

babygirl4028

11/01/2010

No sum1 else.

jessicanichole8

11/01/2010

ok

AlBaNi98

11/01/2010

o sure....... lol...... but its still a really good poem

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

babygirl4028’s Poems (40)

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help 0
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