Hip Hop

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    Hip Hop

    And so she wrote to me,
    The sweetest and simplest piece of poetry/
    Of hope truth and honesty the way it was supposed to be/
    A raw feel she reflected through her melody scheme/
    Was something I figured I would only find in a dream/
    It spoke to me without speaking to me direct/
    Open my mind up to thinking in a new mind set/
    Her words flowed thick
    With black ink off the page I read/
    Each paper sheet cut me deep
    Internally I bled/
    Inspired to pursue my dreams before her words ever finished/
    Proved even the lower class could paint the world in their image/
    A sudden rush that I never knew,
    Dreams stream in clear view/
    The sky was once my limit
    Now I feel like I can break through/
    The power I now possess is released through a pen/
    A fire bomb from my palm like hadoken/
    If not for she I don't know where I would be in this life/
    So I ride by her side with these words I write/

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    Shalady commented on Hip Hop

    09-17-2009

    Nice flow... I love the way you use she as a women when related to music.

    Niecy commented on Hip Hop

    04-02-2009

    Now there's a message in the Music! I like! :)

    DeepEclipse commented on Hip Hop

    03-20-2009

    "Even the lower class could paint the world in their image"

    DeepEclipse commented on Hip Hop

    03-20-2009

    "Even the lower class could paint the world in her image"

    bluequill commented on Hip Hop

    03-17-2009

    cool :)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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