His Game's Up

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Poem Commentary

    Thank you for choosing to read this;  but PLEASE read "The Rhyme Game" by Banetat06 first.  

    His Game's Up

    Ain’t that just like a fool, telling a gang-a-lies

     

    Thinking golden stories, are gonna fool her eyes.

     

    He doesn’t think that she knows,  that in the heat of the night

     

    His low-down-and-dirty self, is not worth the fight.

     

    He didn’t know her at all;  and it was a big surprise

     

    When he found out he would never again, touch those thighs

     

    There’s no more an existence of what he called love

     

    Being single and not caring, she can fly like a dove.

     

    She can really give shit, for him life has in store.

     

    He’s away from her side and she’s blessed.  He can’t hurt her no more

     

    Gone are the days, of her private affair

     

    She’s grown-up now and has hopped in her Rover, after doin her nails and hair.

     

    With her tank and her skirt riding up her thighs looking good!

     

    High as the sky, flyer than fuck.  If she wasn’t so far away, I would.

     

    She’s done with his games.  Now this bitch has some of her own.

     

    Starting with those stupid-ass lames, that she’s leaving alone.

     

    With those biggo titties and that biggo ass

     

    This bitch is getting her groove on finally at last.

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    Banetat06 commented on His Game's Up

    06-18-2009

    OMG!!!I loved it so much...thank u...that was the shit...yea im done wit lames an stupid as niggas...im on my grown woman...im bout makin 6 figures...lol

    FLAWLES

    06/18/2009

    OMG!!! Please! When you make yo 6, may I have "won" at low cost? Oops! Wait a minute. I think I have "1", because I've never lost. I'm glad you liked this, my new friend. Now! Getcho groove on; and never reach the end.

    jlovett05 commented on His Game's Up

    06-18-2009

    omg!! this is awesome i love it.. this really tells a story and your writings i love to read thanks for posting this.. can't wait to read more.. haven't been on for a few days so now i am reading some more.

    FLAWLES

    06/18/2009

    Wassup jlov? I'm glad you liked this. The story it tells originates from "The Rhyme Game" by Banetat06.

    connsk8 commented on His Game's Up

    06-17-2009

    lol, this is too good, I love that you came to her rescue, you should both hook up with each other!! This is a romance in the making, thanks for the read, it was sweet indeed!!!

    FLAWLES

    06/17/2009

    Thank you for your comments. It's just something about when I read certain work. BAM! Stuff comes to mind.

    jademelissa74 commented on His Game's Up

    06-17-2009

    Let me began by saying.. Instructions taken! I have read her poem first and now I just finished yours. You are ToO mUcH!!! :)) Great job, however! You are incredible talented. God bless you my friend!

    FLAWLES

    06/17/2009

    I understand there are ALWAYS, two sides to every story; AND, each "playa" wins and loses. Thank you for all your comments and compliments. You are so respected by many other poets on this site that, they, as well as I, will read what you read.

    RyneishaB commented on His Game's Up

    06-17-2009

    lol...hahaha...i like this ish right here fareal....cuz my dream car is a ranger rover and im single sexy and free, making my own money...hey...and tired of lames...so i can relate!!!!

    FLAWLES

    06/17/2009

    But did you read "The Rhyme Game" first?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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