His Touch

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  • Erotic

    His Touch

    When he touches me
    His fingertips
    Write
    Love letters
    Across my ecstasy



    And the brush
    Of his touch
    Paints pleasure
    Onto the canvas
    Of my body
    That leaves a trail
    Of sweat upon my nakedness

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    Romano commented on His Touch

    06-29-2009

    short and to the point with not much to say yet indulge in and enjoy with the pleasures of intimacy

    dragonheart1 commented on His Touch

    06-19-2009

    This is an interestiong way to decribe the sensitiviyo of ones touch. . .it paints pleasure onto the canvas of my body....I like poems lliek this that paint a picture rather than just use words. Without emotion in words lie you have penned, the poem is meaningless....

    Drivingczar commented on His Touch

    04-08-2009

    Lovely, passionate verses! Great write!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Blaze’s Poems (8)

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    Special Kind Of Love 6
    Listen 7
    Alone 5
    You Taught Me 7
    His Touch 3
    Echo 3
    Destroyed 2
    A Place To Belong 3