HOLD ME DEAR

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    HOLD ME DEAR

    the calendar on the wall says
    the holidays are here
    but time is standing still for me
    come and visit me my dear
    i lay here helpless
    well my body at least
    my mind is working over-time
    as you indulge in a home-made feast
    i wish i would get visitors
    as i rot in this place
    how i long to see you
    my love
    a familiar face
    i know you didn’t visit me
    but you don’t think i know
    the stroke took my functions
    and left me with a body
    useless though
    you think my thoughts were stolen too
    maybe if you’d come and see
    i’m still very much me
    missing you
    it all seems futile now
    what keeps my mind right
    now everything is dark
    your love was my shining light
    i see you daily in my mind
    it’s a faded image
    you know the kind
    i fondly remember your touch
    but lately i can’t feel anything much
    so hold me dear
    as you lie alone in our bed
    for every night i’m with you
    as i hold you in my arms in my head

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    fathi1943 commented on HOLD ME DEAR

    06-28-2009

    A simple request for a much wanted desire. Feminine, true and direct.

    organicchick

    06/29/2009

    Thanks for the comment....this poem came from the emotions i experinced working at a nursing home.

    beautifuldeath commented on HOLD ME DEAR

    04-01-2009

    i enjoyed the read. well done.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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