Hold Me Tight

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    Hold Me Tight

    Hold me tight,
    Dont let me go,
    Your the band-aid that's holding the broken pieces of my heart together,
    The hand that sqweezes mine tight reasuringly,
    The sun that warms my cheeks and turns them tickle me pink.
    The cold wind that gives me nervous goosebumps,
    My personal cheerleader that keeps me going no matter how tired I get,
    Without you,
    I'd be a puddle of metaphoric blood on the floor,
    Let us reminisce in what we have,
    And never forget our pasts,
    The good and the bad that they hold,
    It brought us together somehow,
    Fate has interveined,
    So dont let me go,
    Hold me tight,
    And never let go.

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    bforibus commented on Hold Me Tight

    09-30-2009

    absolutely a great love story. the let a bird fly away and if it comes back saga. great job in making it your own.

    HeavensGuardian commented on Hold Me Tight

    09-14-2009

    A poetic piece of a heart, seeking the comfort of love found in the wisdom of words.

    Ninjaboy commented on Hold Me Tight

    09-12-2009

    a very nice poem (i don't normally like these kinds of poems) i think if you keep writing you'll go far

    danyellmarie commented on Hold Me Tight

    08-06-2009

    I can definitely relate to your poem. I love the way you write :D

    exotic commented on Hold Me Tight

    07-09-2009

    Very sweet and candid..........................................................................

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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