Holiday Haiku- Part 1

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    i wrote this haikus for the holidays, i guess i had nothing better to do with my time then lol.....:))

    Holiday Haiku- Part 1

    Snow covers the Earth

    Fireworks illuminate the night sky

    The New Year arrives

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    Joy and laughter fill the air

    Glasses full with champagne

    Say cheers to the New Year

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    New Year brings new beginnings

    New luck and new hope

    The past is dead and gone!

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    Fire burning in the fireplace

    Next to the Christmas tree

    Where kids unwrap presents

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    The Spirit of Christmas:

     

    Family gatherings, time of cheer,

    Giving gifts of love

    To your dearest

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    The earth sleeps under blanket of snow

    Fire burns in the fireplace

    The clock strikes twelve

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    Fireworks illuminate the night sky

    People make toasts and cheers

    For the New Year

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    The clock strikes twelve

    Glasses full with Champaign and cheers

    Welcome new beginnings

     

    The end of Part 1- To be continued............. 

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    Stryx commented on Holiday Haiku- Part 1

    01-08-2010

    Haiku is not just short poetry - it has a discipline [5-7-5]
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    goldygirl

    03/06/2010

    Well, i thought i followed the format for 17 syllables...but it's kinda hard to fit the words in this format 5-7-5 plus it's too short for my liking..But i like to experiment with it...

    Stryx

    03/06/2010

    5-7-5 is the challenge: To do it just so Is the callenge of Haiku Else it's just a write

    Stryx

    03/07/2010

    My comment was in Haiku form, But the result was all in one line. It was still 5-7-5 however.'-)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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