Hollow Eyes

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Hollow Eyes

help me now
as these wrists bleed tears
let the silence come
and replace these fears

a smile unforgiving
as it sits in a Neuss
wrapped tightly on these thoughts
so they can’t get loose

with a mind not straight
suffocating these veins
as empowered thoughts
upon the razor stain

now death so sweet
as it stands on the lies
and I smile at the truth
through hollow eyes.....

By: Kevin Bakker

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beautifuldeath commented on Hollow Eyes

12-07-2008

I think you are very talented with words.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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