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    This a poem about i feel at times.

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    As I step in the Grass.

    Dead Leaves under my bare feet.

    Mind wandering.

    Who am I?

    Why am i here.

    Hands stuck in my pockets.

    Kicking a stone to show another stone.
    Brushing the dirt of to show a name.

    Roxy.

    Looking at the house.

    A Cracked window a wail from the inside.

    Is it Lizz?

    Home.

    I Step in.

    I am Olivia,

    I am Home.

    I feel out of place.

    Home should feel good to be there.

    I was only gone for an hour.

    Yetit felt like years.

    Yet i feel as if i dont belong.

    The walls of my room,

    Burning my mind,

    Saying stay here I will keep you safe.

    I feel as if i am choking.

    Home.

    I want to feel Home.

    This is my family i am with.
    Mom and Dad,

    Shelly, And Amanda,

    Cassie, And Jody,

    Lizz, And Me,

    and Nick.

    My Sister and brother.

    They know not how i feel.

    Trapped like a Cat in a cage.

    Let me feel at home again.

    Home please bring me back again.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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