homesick

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    • arpee
    • ..thanks guys for comments and ratings!

    homesick

    i always think back home,
    felt so alone in this room.
    so helpless in this place,
    no sunshine in my face.

    too afraid to move on,
     took the less traveled on.
    felt the pang on my chest,
    do i need some day's rest?

    will give up a year of my life,
    just to reach and touch you tonight.
    thousand year it seem since,
    i saw your comely face and grin.

    how i long for your kiss,
    of sweet taste and embrace.
    'normal' to felt this way,
    it's part of the process they say.

    arpee'04 

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    am2anangel commented on homesick

    02-23-2011

    loved this one the emotions poured from the page. very well done. -Tonya

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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