hoot

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  • LeeLee420xx
  • I am strong Because I have been Weak I Am Beautiful Because I Know My Flaws,I Am Afraid because I have Been Fearless, I Can be a Fool because I Know The Meaning Of Being Wise. I am me and I am awsome!

hoot

Colors floating everywhere.
Music flowing through my hair.
The wind tingles my soul.
As I walk the earth as it unfolds.
The rain falls on my head.
To my toes it drips instead.
Fire no longer stays at bay.
It's spending it time giving it's power away.
Voices lifting from every where.
Screams of joy, without care.
Each experience so unique.
It felt like dancing in the streets.
Even if for just one night.
I'm glad i took that crazy flight.

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Olan01 commented on hoot

01-06-2011

This was enjoyable to read and I like the couplet ending, kin of sonnet like, almost. Olan.

kdarcy commented on hoot

10-23-2010

A fun read for me, thanks for sharing a smile, be well .............. k

LeeLee420xx

11/25/2010

thank you , what drove it was so much fun :)

Musicmynded1 commented on hoot

08-30-2010

Lots of good stuff to be captured if we just keep writing it all down huh?.. nice!

LeeLee420xx

08/30/2010

i need a digital recorder so i can say whay i'm thinking at the time. i think i could make some pretty groovy stuff from it , lol, thx

Hiporlacking commented on hoot

08-28-2010

It sounds like you went on quite a trip. I'm on to you Miss Lee Lee. Haha.

LeeLee420xx

08/28/2010

indeed it was a journey :))

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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