Hope to Hope

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    Hope to Hope

    What do you see when you look at me?
    For a girl thats so hopeless...
    What good am I?
    Does your heart
    skip its beat?
    When I try to tell you
    everything will be okay?
    Do you smell your jacket,
    hours after leaving
    to catch some trace
    of the scent of me,
    the way I do,
    trying to breathe in your smell?
    When we talk,
    do you regain hope?
    A tiny sliver of hope?
    Maybe you hope...
    To hope? 

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    Sydney commented on Hope to Hope

    11-22-2010

    i agree with Sx9 here. youve weaved in what he/she has said. Sydney

    brokenhearted11

    11/22/2010

    thanks.. haha yeah, shes amazing.

    Sx9 commented on Hope to Hope

    11-02-2010

    yes we all do,,for what we see in you is our own perception of beauty,pain and feminine curves that melt souls,we may not say,, but if we have to you would be the last one to know,,so we hope for that hope,,nicely put,written and cunning,,

    brokenhearted11

    11/04/2010

    thankyou! its about my bestfriend.. who i happen to be in love with. anyways, thanks :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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