hopeful proud tears

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  • LeeLee420xx
  • I am strong Because I have been Weak I Am Beautiful Because I Know My Flaws,I Am Afraid because I have Been Fearless, I Can be a Fool because I Know The Meaning Of Being Wise. I am me and I am awsome!

hopeful proud tears

We walk down this road with expectations of what it will be.
Of happiness and hope and even a bit of mystery.
The road is winding with ups and downs.
You hear a voice that says " just keep your feet on the ground."
You're fearful at first, but that just won't do.
This is the road that has been waiting for you.
Everything they've taught you comes into play here.
They kiss you and hug you with hopeful proud tears.
Free and easy you look around.
Take a deep breath, hear the new sounds.
Curious and caution you are first.
Don't want to end up face down in the dirt.
And as the world has you for just a few years.
There is something that replaces all of your fears.
Worry and heart ache are two of the best.
But you'll get around to feeling the rest.
You will feel buried, left in the dust.
Be told it's no big deal don't put up a fuss.
She will chew you up and spit you out.
Life is one hell of a ride there is no doubt.
but when it is all over i know you will find.
The things that stayed deep inside your mind.
The greatest reason for being here.
Was all of the love and the hopeful proud tears.

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Ming commented on hopeful proud tears

01-12-2011

I usually don't like rhymes , but, this one I like , maybe because of the images contained, and it's honesty. -Ming

LeeLee420xx

02/25/2011

Thank you :)

Olan01 commented on hopeful proud tears

01-06-2011

A very nice couplet poem that flows and the rhyme does not stand out like a sore thumb like so many do. Love, peace and freedom, Olan.

LeeLee420xx

01/06/2011

it kinda flowed like dr. suess to me lol.. thank you for reading :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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