Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

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This is the story of a young boy in love. He's blindly loving an older man. The boy longs for compassion and holding hands, while the man just doesn't have love in his plan. An ode, if you must, to all the boys who fall in love with men who use them as toys.

Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

In my heartbreak, I lie;
In truth, I cry.
Lifelessly wondering,
yet still hopelessly dreaming.
Feeding my temptations and desires,
the feel of your breath is igniting my fires.
Emotionless notions and forward advances,
a fashion of passion and old awkward glances.
Stolen moments and feelings,
my favorite things to reminisce are fleeting.

I'm blindly longing for you and I to be whole,
yet I fear the cold of my feelings unrequited.
BUT love is love,
and life without love isn't worth living.
You might not think so,
but your heart is worth giving.
Don't listen to the voices screaming,
your are enough, don't believe otherwise.

I'm tired of crying and bleeding,
but until your mine, I'm stuck here repeating.
Repeating.

In my heartbreak, i lie;
in truth, i cry,
for you and me.

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tykehall commented on Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

09-12-2011

this is a really good grouping of words, i enjoyed this poem a lot thanks for sharing

BrokenAndrew

09/13/2011

thanks for reading it, and in response to your comment on My Simpler Thoughts On You, you are already on my friend list so I don't think you need to send one, but I would accept it if you did

papapaczki commented on Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

03-04-2010

Good meter and emotion throughout this. Nice write.

BrokenAndrew

03/04/2010

wow...thank you so much

AlexAndreXela commented on Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

03-04-2010

This is amazing. I can relate to it, which makes it even better. I wish i could help you win that contest, determination is a great thing to have ;)

BrokenAndrew commented on Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

03-04-2010

definetly my favorite work...just gotta get it published in that book! I need to win, haha, i'm determined!

BrokenAndrew commented on Hopelessly Falling, Lifelessly Calling

03-04-2010

my favorite peice

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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