Hopelessly Hopeful

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    Hopelessly Hopeful
    Don’t worry if you can’t find the right words to say
    My thoughts aren’t making much sense anyway
    I find it hard to believe
    That nothing is ever what it seems
    I fear the secrets I cannot hide
    Their existence are wasting my time
    I don’t know exactly where I’m going
    But I’ll find love without even knowing
    It’s hard to forget the past
    The promised love that didn’t last
    I can’t remember the way it used to feel
    When everything around me felt so real
    Reality hits hard
    And you realize that you didn’t really get that far
    Life is just a mere frame of time
    Nothing really different about yours…or mine
    It all evens out pretty rough
    I’m just hopelessly hopeful, you’re just hopeless enough
    If my presence were to disappear
    Then u would have nothing left to fear
    What if the sun never came to relieve the night?
    Do you think you’d make it out alright?
    Damn, these thoughts are never ending
    And these questions have no meaning
    Time is healing right now
    And I will forget some how
    I’m feeling so good
    So please crush my dreams one more time if you could
    I can’t really take the pain any longer
    But I know I will make it out much stronger

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    kkirkwood commented on Hopelessly Hopeful

    10-14-2010

    LIke a friend once told me against hope believe in hope. Cause there is always a better day coming.
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    dmc1259

    11/13/2010

    Thank you for sharing that with me. I love it.

    ledbet79 commented on Hopelessly Hopeful

    08-27-2009

    I think if you tried to shorten this poem you could give it more power. You are repeating the same thoughts just with different words. You should select the most significant parts and that should make your poem more meaningful.
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    dmc1259

    11/06/2009

    Thank you I will def take into consideration what you have said. I am always open to pointers

    magati commented on Hopelessly Hopeful

    03-12-2009

    dmc..thts anice piece..bt remember live is just the present moment, yester was adream and morrow is jst hope tht may never be..but now is alive so live my live!
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    pammy1414 commented on Hopelessly Hopeful

    02-15-2009

    I have read all your peoms posted and every time I read one, I would say to myself, this is my favorite, then I realized each one I read I thought the same thing. Very good
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    Ducky commented on Hopelessly Hopeful

    12-23-2008

    I like this poem because it shows courage and no matter what happens you make it out stronger than before
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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