house
Surrounded by green grass,
Around her playing some little children,
Hugging me like mothers,
Comfort me just like an old friend.
I love you, my house
house
5 Comments
Tags: Home
- Singing
- I am on the way of life of hard struggle
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redbloodink commented on house
12-07-2009
- sweet.... Much blessings to your house and your family..... Red
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12/08/2009
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aliciagall commented on house
11-11-2009
- It reads like a dream. We don't always find comfort in our homes but we should definitely thank God if we can find comfort within ourselves.
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11/11/2009
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11-05-2009
- wow. this is beautiful. the short passages of thoughts spoke volumes. great job.
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11/05/2009
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BigDaddyCash commented on house
11-05-2009
- Beautiful thought why not add another cadenza and make it a home. As for me, I admire my house but I truly love my home. I shadowed my home with a magnificent weeping willow and surrounded it with cascades of beautiful flowers. I’m a slave in my house but I’m a king in my home. You have great talents to share with the world spread your arms and fly like an eagle. LOL, BDC
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11/05/2009
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