How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......


  • Altair
  • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

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commentary not needed, just embrace what I am trying to say.....similarity and difference

How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......

From my time to movement of mind I’ am free
to journey with emotive gestures in a sea
of dead metaphors in conquest of me
the water falls to nothingness of where I must be.

Sight envisions the might of the warrants
of daemons deterrent in your thoughts and moments
Open your autonomy of truth in yourself
what’s left is the death of conformity's breath.

My conquest in this act is passionate in jest
Let's zest beyond the flesh to a infinite manifest
A contest in life if there is truth to it's strife
Our God is the might of one's faith in flight
Light on your feet all wings are unique
If we treat the circumstance with emotional grief
then the gesture means nothing as you fall to defeat
I weep for the loss in reciprocal beats.

Hello angelic spirit, daemonic mirror image
your voice beyond sight, my third eye only see's it
Such an angel of matted dreams and feathered wings in scheme
Unfortunate happenings in beauty of tragedy
All focused vanity yields your imagining
Why do you speak with supposed groveling?
A metaphor of the age I meditate on this saddening.

Hello angel upon wings of hate, why?
Superfluous you speculate upon minute inclined
Divined as your belief, contradict your peace
Nomenclature of your feathers, you react to me
Into the deaths of your black hole soul of nothingness
Bereaved to the blessed you ingest your bliss.

Goodbye angel of greater expectations than I
would rather die for pure cause than live a lie
Such sadness fills the face when death is placed
in the midst of wild cards so dealt in haste
In singularity my journey is complimentary
through the cosmos and heavens I become infinity
My soul's obliquity is not without pause
flaws to such perfection in welcoming cause
is just in righteousness for the truth I lust
in disgust of much humanity that rots with the touch
then repent too late, when the gates are abroad
attracted to the light though darkness you sought
Pour in valorous hoards to the door
slammed in your faces as your tumble to the core..

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ginga commented on How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......


Altair, The attitude displayed here and the outcomes are quite haunting. A very interesting take on speaking with angels. ginga



Thank you ginga, the comment is appreciate from a poet of your caliber..and yes the thoughts that ran through my head were quite eclectic yet, it was what I felt as I related the similarities between the two entities and how we are all subject to wiles of indifference and strife.

SuperChick76 commented on How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......


Goodbye angel of greater expectations than I, I'd rather die for pure cause than live a lie. Damn, man, brilliant! Just brilliant. So great a being yet so disappointing. Beautifully expressed. I enjoyed the read.



haha, wow that line has the readers buzzing indeed, glad you got the expression and felt what I was feeling when I wrote it

WordSlinger commented on How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......


Goodbye angel of greater expectations than I would rather die for pure cause than live a lie those lines are priceless, ty WS



thank you for your visit WS, that line does seem to turn the wheels a bit...

knight4696 commented on How Angels and Human Inclinations are One......


Altair! An Awesome write my friend! :) Needless to say I love it! Your use of imagery, rhyme scheme and metaphors is truly amazing. My favorite line from this masterpiece is: ....... Goodbye angel of greater expectations than I - would rather die for pure cause than live a lie. Awesome!! :) Ken



Thanks again my friend, I was in a really dark place when i wrote this, not dark as in evil, but a room in my thought where all I could think of was how the two entities share so many similarities, yet as humans we perhaps fail to notice such inclinations..but before I go off the deep end about this one, let me just say thanks again and stop lol

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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