How Do We Change This

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    I want to give thanks to the men and women who are doing what they can to keep our country free... And wish them to come back home safely... Wordspruer

    How Do We Change This

     How can we change this
    Everyone seems to forget that we are last on the list
    We act like we don't have voices to speak
    We the people should try to get answers stop being weak

    How can we change this
    We need to realize that there is truly a problem that exsist
    Stop ignoring our needs to and become strong
    We got to stand up and be counted before too long

    Why are we spending money on wars that isn't even ours
    While our children are being slighted, which is reducing our powers by the hours

    How do we change this
    It won't make us selfish to ask to be first would be a reasonable twist
    We gave enough to our country in what we thought was right
    Now it is time to bring an end to this fight

    How can we change this , I'll have to say
    We need to all sit down and find a better way
    To start by lying down our weapons, and lending a ear
    Finding out what would reduce everyones worries and fears

    How can we change this, By stop having certain individuals to make choices for us
    I am talking of all sides, to start being able to give in and trust
    I am a believer that there solution to all problems that will arise
    If we just stop making excuse for war with a hidden disguise

    I think that this is how we can change this
    Contact our leaders , President, Senate and Congressman , give reason to resist
    Spending our money on things that we need other than lies
    Bring back the right to the people, as well as pride in our eyes

    "How Can We Change This"

    "Wordspruer"

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    RPT40 commented on How Do We Change This

    02-06-2010

    This is a very well written piece. I look at this situation like driving fast on ice. As much as we want this to stop, we can't just slam on the brakes and expect to come to a safe conclusion. If it were that easy, it would be done already. There is a way out of everything, and we need to find the correct way out of this. Once again, great write!
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    wordspruer

    02/07/2010

    Thank you for your comments... I try to give the inner thoughts to rel life situations... As you say, if it were to be settled that easy then we would be mining our own business and working on our own economy... For too many cooks can spoil the broth... They say there will be an end to our world soon... Only be cause we will cause this... By us being so involved in competative, domenation, and collaberation on the wrong things... Thanks again...Wordspruer...

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