How Many

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    How Many

    I TRIED to Count the seconds,
    But there were to many,
    I TRIED to COUNT the Mintutes,

    There were just as many.
    The HOURS are to many, DO i count the DAYS,
    I already know the
    answer.
    TO Many
    But i know my HEART,I,ll LOVE YOU forever.
    For many SECONDS,MINUTES,DAYS,and YEARS.
    I can,t count how MANY.

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    HarverTomsson commented on How Many

    12-23-2010

    This poem is like your favorite cousin who tickles you upon meeting. Is it sexy after all? or just warm affection? Could mention a typo here and there, but who's counting? LOL Harv

    charmlessman2d commented on How Many

    03-24-2010

    hate to be the grammer police here, but it would be TOO MANY. not TO MANY. other than that..i love this poem. its playful the way you wrote it. andits not too serious. but you do get to your point which i like. because it shows your confidence and patience as you count out the days to whatever it was you were waiting for. hope it was worth the wait!

    RPT40 commented on How Many

    02-06-2010

    I like how this reads in a lighthearted way, but the strength of the message shines through

    bluewolf commented on How Many

    01-22-2010

    A very heartfelt emotional display of the depth of love one can have for another, while at the same time dreading the loss of such an emotional connection. Good work.

    muttman1 commented on How Many

    02-05-2009

    Short and very deep at the same time I like your stlye

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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