How to Fly

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  • Falling

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    i'm bored and had nothing better to do

    How to Fly

     How to Die
    How to sigh
    How to fly

    The sky so blue
    The earth so new

    See a roo
    Hear the doves coo

    Flying high in the sky
    What a wonderful thing to do

    Wind in your hair
    Song in your heart

    Till reality crashes down
    Breaking many parts

    Spiral down
    Hiting the ground

    No time to shuder
    Till your six feet under

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    brokenhearted11 commented on How to Fly

    07-21-2010

    nice. a bit of spelling mistakes/typos, but good;. really like the beginning with teh crossed out names. keep writing :)
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    Rhymer commented on How to Fly

    05-07-2010

    I like the way you seemed to struggle with the name for the poem before settling on the perfect one. Enjoyed the read, reminded me of a person facing their own mortality. Life has a way of knocking a person down just when they flying high.
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    Emy717 commented on How to Fly

    04-11-2010

    sorry for the miss spelling
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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