howl to the moon

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  • JudeDruid
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sequel to my poem "howl" kind of childish but i like it (for lonewolf)

howl to the moon

the story continues
the lone wolf strides
far from his family
they are left behind

he trods on the path
snow kicks up from his feet
the cold trek across Alaska
the moon he shall greet

he stops in his tracks
and looks twords the sky
let's out great howl
the sound of it flys

he morns for his mother
he cries for his dad
his siblings are gone
he feels he's gone mad

but onward he goes
off in the snow
where's he to next
stayed tuned for the next show :D

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earthly commented on howl to the moon

03-04-2010

Love it-my son and I love wolves and feel for their plight...Earthly

BringMeBullets commented on howl to the moon

03-04-2010

Ha ha. Great ending. Loved it. I like the continuation from the first poem, "Howl." Brilliance. You have talent. :)

UnoMono commented on howl to the moon

03-03-2010

Simplicity is entertainment in a short minute...This poem gives a clear and respectable image in a breif moment.

dahlusion commented on howl to the moon

03-02-2010

nicely put together with some unique rhymes. Peace and Light

cliftondurant commented on howl to the moon

02-12-2010

hey you got me hook I will tune in I love the story good job

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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