Huntress

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In this it's a short story about a young vampire hunting her maker

Huntress

In the darkness walk towards prey
A young man in blue
It's hard to tell what he's doing out this late
But I will not be intimidated by him
As I close in on him I can hear his blood moving in his veins
I come up behind him
He doesn't know I'm behind him
I lean in and clap on to his neck
My fangs sink in
And as I sink to the ground with him in my arms
I mark him and drain him
I lay him flat and close his eyes, laying some coins on his closed eyes
My mark that I had taken a life, but sent him away peacefully
I'm hunting for someone
Who I have yet to find
The man who mad me
Took my choice to this life
I've laid to rest many
I do not want to take these life
But I will not force upon them this....curse
I've changed my name, I'm now the Huntress
Just looking for my redemption
Looking to end the life of the one who made me this way
I know that I have an eternity to look
And I will look
But the hunger calls to me nightly
And I can't not answer it
I take a life every night
Laying to rest another soul
I hate what I've become
So I hunt the one who made me
To end the torment, once I've killed him
I'll take my life, to make up for all those souls I laid to rest

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