Hurt

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    Hurt

     I open my eyes,
    Just to see,
    You were standing there next to me.
    I look around,
    Just to see,
    You were looking straight at me.
    I tried to sit,
    Just to see,
    You would not let me.
    I asked,
    "Why won't you let me sit?"
    And you said,
    "You hurt yourself,
    You're in the hospital,
    Hooked up to tube,
    How could I let you sit up and die?"
    I asked, stupidly,
    "Why would I die?"
    You sigh and answer,
    "These tubes are keeping you alive. If you sit up,
    They'll unattach, and you'll die."
    "You care?"
    "Yes, I care about you."
    "Then I won't sit up until I'm fine."

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    mamasan commented on Hurt

    11-15-2009

    Oh you know how to use words and that is for sure and each line is more provactive than the next calling me to read the next and the next.......great writing
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    himekachan111

    09/26/2011

    thank you :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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