I AM A POTE

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    I AM A POTE

    Im good pote I tell you how it is I am all real my pomes  are Im about my life and about love hurt pain lm great pote I got what it takes its all in slide of me in my heart and sole baby my fans love me cuse I say what I mean cuase I live it ever day ever nigth its a new  pome its a new store Im the greats pote to my love ones that love me so musch with  that passion in slide that they have to give me from they hearts and sloes for real i mean it what i say is real Im good pote I go with it i feel it i need i love its in me baby yea u all know what i mean i good pote says what they mean and how they feel deep in slide them yup u know.potes.1loves to u all.

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    charmlessman2d commented on I AM A POTE

    03-24-2010

    this is by far the best pome i've read on this site. while others try to hide behind big words and phrases. you just walk in the room, lay your toolbelt on the table and just say" hey i'm hear, whose gunna lissen to me??!!"" goodjob woman. check you out!

    Athena1989

    01/18/2012

    thanks

    Grito commented on I AM A POTE

    08-27-2009

    That's right Athena, tell them how it is, they them for real!!!

    laydbak1 commented on I AM A POTE

    07-04-2009

    I'm at a loss for the right words to accurately describe just how very special this piece really is....

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Athena1989’s Poems (16)

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    I GYPSY 2
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    I WANT A LOVE OF MY OWN 1
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    Hypnotize 2
    I AM A POTE 3
    I WANT 2
    the things 1
    I want your 1
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