I Am A Surviver

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

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I wrote this for people who have been sexually assulted so they know they can take a stand!

I Am A Surviver

Just who the hell do you
   Think you are
Going around and taking
  Whatever you want
From all the young girls
  Who come your way.

I'm very angery umm and disapointed
   My baby girl thought
Thought that she could trust you
  But look at what trust got her
I don't know if my baby can or will
   Ever trust again.

The torn dress, and shattred look
   Is more then most can bare
But i'm going to hold my head uo high,
   I won't let you win
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  I don't fall that easy
I will beat you with my wit and
  My words alone.
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  IK'm stronger then most think
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  And I will I will I will win.

You took something from me that was never yours
  To take in the first place
I was weak weaker then I'd ever been to weak to fight
  But day by day I gained the stregth
I needed to keep carrying on day by day.
   I took a deep deep breath
I took a stand and shouted out to the world
  I won't let you win!

The torn dress, and the shattred look
  Is more then most can bare
But i'm going to hold my head up high,
  I won't let you win
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  I don't fall that easy
I will beat you with my wit and
  My words alone
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  I'm stronger then most think
Because I am a surviver, I am a fighter
  And I will I will I will win.

I am a surviver, I am a fighter
 And I I will win!!

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Ozzy77 commented on I Am A Surviver

06-15-2013

Strong emotion in the poem. Sounds very traumatic. I don't mean to nitpick, but since Survivor is the title and oft-repeating theme, I would edit the poem and spell it correctly. Especially if you plan on publishing it in a poetry collection.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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I Am A Surviver 1
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