I Await

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    I Await

    I saw you today
    dancing in a daydream
    The entire world stopped spinning
    to watch as you moved between dimensions

    I was falling
    straight up to the stars
    a willing sacrifice to your smile
    unafraid of the repercussions
    I allowed the gates to be opened

    The darkness
    poured down like rain in an attempt
    to steal the remnants of hope
    to conquer the battlefield of the future

    Brave nights of passion
    stand on the firing line,
    awaiting the final command
    embracing the next step
    ready to ascend

    A lifetime lived and learned
    in an effort to free the magic within
    I let go and fell to my death
    and there I will remain
    until I decide to awaken
    for the very first time

    I can no longer see
    so I just look
    I wander as if lost
    drunk and disoriented
    awaiting your hand

    I believe in more than forever,
    stared into the face of oblivion
    embraced the lashings of feeling,
    with no want of recourse

    I am real
    I am here
    I am yours
    I await

    Today existed only for
    the moment when you were in it

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    Olan01 commented on I Await

    10-12-2010

    Love this poem of insight of inner self. Congrats on writing this wonderful poem an effort to free the magic within and that is what this poem is, pure magic.

    Artie

    11/12/2010

    Thank you Olan

    Embraced commented on I Await

    09-13-2010

    I am almost speechless.........that was great...... wow.....total 10.........

    bradford commented on I Await

    08-03-2010

    a very soul wrenching poem. this is such a baring of the soul. i liked it

    dlaino03 commented on I Await

    07-27-2010

    You are an inspiration to me. It might even be possible that we are soul mates.

    Corinna commented on I Await

    05-23-2010

    I am left feeling like a soul waiting to be reborn, a soul with the knowing of where to go, but waiting for it's partner to see it. Great read!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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