I Came A pond A Thought Today

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    I Came A pond A Thought Today

     

              

     
    I came upon a thought today, aimlessly moving in my way. 

    Typically taunting, aloof in its ways. 

    I try to remember, sustaining  its flight.

    I clear a space in circle the thought, ready to fight for what I lost.

    It’s mine to have, but what could it be, this thought walking around in me. 

    Give up your tale, written word, and phrase of song or what I heard. 

    To pull my hair, pulling down tight. 

    I think so hard, I think light. 

    I give, I yield, turn of the white. 

    Dark and still the rest in me, the thought returns, reminding me.



    BY: RJK

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    KtIrish commented on I Came A pond A Thought Today

    11-07-2009

    hey, this is pretty groovy! I like it lots. I think it's worth more than one read. So I'm going to read it again...Write on.
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    IzzyGumbo commented on I Came A pond A Thought Today

    11-03-2009

    Nice! Well done my friend and it flows with a lot of energy.
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    icu2 commented on I Came A pond A Thought Today

    10-29-2009

    I like this! It tells just what we poets experience many times when we are out and do not have a pen! Love it!
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    Mareann commented on I Came A pond A Thought Today

    10-20-2009

    Oh yes, you defintely have the knack for writing poetry. I liked this poem, very much, thank you, mareann http://mareannspoetry.ning.com
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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