I can feel it in the wind.

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    I can feel it in the wind.

    The clouds are moving across the ocean

    Hanging very low.

     

    The wind is rocking the boat back and forth

    Making me want you more and more.

     

    I have tried to get pass the feelings

    But I just can’t let it go.

     

    I can feel it in the wind

    And now it’s starting to blow a little more.

     

    The wind is blowing in every direction

    Tilting the boat here and there.

    Pushing us together until we can’t be pushed anymore.

     

    Wrapping my arms around you

    I whispered in your ear

    That I can feel it in the wind.

     

    And as long as it blows

    I will never let you go.

    So let’s forever stay on this boat.

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    Doninha commented on I can feel it in the wind.

    10-11-2009

    I LOVE THIS POEM! The wind, your emotions, the boat, your relationship! You are a gifted and dedicated poet and songwriter!
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    mdpoetgirl commented on I can feel it in the wind.

    10-10-2009

    This is masterfully conceived and beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it.
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    almonord1990

    10/11/2009

    thank you

    Crush commented on I can feel it in the wind.

    10-10-2009

    nineteen years old and with this kind of sensitivity in a world klike ours? good for you and your wonderful words. i enjoyed this an great deal. keep up with what you do and stay true to yourself, mate.
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    almonord1990

    10/10/2009

    thank you friend

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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