I can feel it in the wind.

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I can feel it in the wind.

The clouds are moving across the ocean

Hanging very low.

 

The wind is rocking the boat back and forth

Making me want you more and more.

 

I have tried to get pass the feelings

But I just can’t let it go.

 

I can feel it in the wind

And now it’s starting to blow a little more.

 

The wind is blowing in every direction

Tilting the boat here and there.

Pushing us together until we can’t be pushed anymore.

 

Wrapping my arms around you

I whispered in your ear

That I can feel it in the wind.

 

And as long as it blows

I will never let you go.

So let’s forever stay on this boat.

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Doninha commented on I can feel it in the wind.

10-11-2009

I LOVE THIS POEM! The wind, your emotions, the boat, your relationship! You are a gifted and dedicated poet and songwriter!

mdpoetgirl commented on I can feel it in the wind.

10-10-2009

This is masterfully conceived and beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it.

almonord1990

10/11/2009

thank you

Crush commented on I can feel it in the wind.

10-10-2009

nineteen years old and with this kind of sensitivity in a world klike ours? good for you and your wonderful words. i enjoyed this an great deal. keep up with what you do and stay true to yourself, mate.

almonord1990

10/10/2009

thank you friend

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7